Awesome use of those stock!!! Looks amazing, the textures are brilliant!

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he he he thankyou sooo much!!!

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Yeah, this one looks really quite good and very stylish. If I had to crit (as I always do) I'd say that there are no problems, but a couple of small pointers for future reference.

To make the writing look more like ink on a page, its usually a good idea to lower the opacity a little bit so that the page texture comes through. This makes it seem like the ink has absorbed in to the page a bit. Also, its generally best not to use a pitch black in a finished work because it looks too dead and deep.

Also, if you're doing a scene like this (with two solid planes (the page and the table) up close to one another) in the future, its generally good to darken the background plane (in this case the desk) just a little bit more so that you create a sharper focus on the front plane (the page here). It just creates a bit more depth and focus.

I don't mean to seem like a know it all, I can only say whats worked for me and hope that you take it as good-natured advice. I just feel thats the point of pic comments on devart.. To help and be helped alike.

I really like this piece. It'd even make a good template for a website with a little modification and some sharp css skills.

Congrats and thanks for sharing.

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duude! you are so awesome!

You are the only one who ever helps and points out stuff! thanks heaps, and the writing was something thats been bugging me! and i didnt think to do that with the writing, will try that out next time i do something with writing!


Thanks heaps! this is the whole reason I upload to deviant art! just for advice and help to improve my work!




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My pleasure!

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Excellent Work!

Thanks I'm glad you appreciate that. I get very little support from my friends on what I can improve on lol. I think only two or three of them give any advice at all.

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ha ha ha yeah, none of mine do! i think friends just worry bout hurting the other person by helping!

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OH MY GOD! we totally have something in common! we both like stuff!

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I think too many people expect it to be just another myspace where you absent-mindedly say "yah dats coo' luv tha hair whos dat wiv ya??" Just saying "cool pic" really isn't worth the comment lol.

Anyways, enough from me. Nice work

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